Re: Example of one belief, passion for the mission analysis for Evaldo Copy writing technique

For PPP

     Opportunity  -  Getting a site near the PP MP, 3 km from Robinson, 2 km from City hall, 5 km from PP International airport

     Desire:    Problem:    PPP is fully sold out,  Prices at 100k to 120K    Many people including Quezon and Roxas want a PPP sitte

     System:    Cash at 30% less, monthly no dp

     In many parts of the province as we sell our memorial parks,, many still prefer PPP sie.  But prices land at PPP is exorbitant

     Fortunately we got a site that is affordable and and a fantastic deal, that is why we can offer to you to ger a memorial park stie ateither:

     less 30-40% when owned in cash, or low low monthly no dp, if  a little bit higher

   

On Fri, Feb 14, 2025 at 1:37 PM Jorge Saguinsin <jorge.saguinsin@gmail.com> wrote:

A copy writer must have a belief, an overriding mission to which is he is very passionate a good copy.

The insight, the underlying principle guides him/and marketing in writing the copy.  Without the direction, no good copy can be written

 Mission/belief for the product answers the questions:

1.  What is the desire

2.  The new opportunity

3.  The new system, the new solution.

Suppose in Albol, you are offering the new project:

1  What is the desire -  To own an mp that is near, and probably that is affordable

2.  The new opportunity:

     1.  The new project which can be offered at a low price

     2.  The special offer by the Bonagon family to the kabarangay and friends

3.  The new system:    low cash price vs the existing

                                    low monthly, no dp

THE COPY"  for Albol

The owner of the new proposed memorial park, is offering kabarangay and friends, senior special privilege to acquire, before it is sold to public, chance to own memorial parks at unbelievable prices:

      Cash at 50% discount vs existing memorial parks;

      Or low monthly affordable payments no dp.   

The copy for St Jose, Urdaneta

Mang Andi Calica, the developer, CEO of Himlayan San Jose is endorsing that his kababayan get the first opportunity and privilege to own a memorial park plot at Himlayan San Jose.   The plots are located along Urdaneta Calasiao highway and is nestled among Tricities of Pangasinan:   Urdaneta, San Carlos and Dagupan

The next developer, known for its 42 years experience will fully devvelop the memorial park;  it has 2 existing memorial parks in Pangasinan, 3 in region 1..

The special offer is at 50% of  competitive products or

Very low monthly payments, no downpayment

Why dont you grab this opportunity now?

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Jorge U. Saguinsin

To "be the best, do your best, expect the best" always

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Jorge U. Saguinsin

To "be the best, do your best, expect the best" always

N.B.   The information contained herein are private and confidential in nature.  The sender does not assume any damage that may arise from improper use of the email contained. ;  especially if the information in this communication falls into the wrong hands causing damage and loss. to the company or any other parties.